OMG AMAZING!!!! o.o
MAN!!! This Series keeps getting better and better... Ive seen all ur Previous Ones Parts 1-3 and this by far is AMAZING!!
YOU ARE NOW OFFICIALLY MY FAVOURITE AUTHOR!!
I cant wait fot PART 5! I bet it might take You at least 3 Months To make Innit? Well I can wait that Long! ^^
FINALLY NO MORE BUTTONS YAHOOOOOOOO!!!
I loved the use of the space bar and Your story line is soooooo
Wonderful... Knuckles died! Oh No.
But what Turbo Mecha Sonic did to cream was just Unfair! lol >.<
Just a couple DRAWBACKS!!
Please do not use Ryu's TAKUMANSENPRUKYUKU Sound on Sonic when he did the hurricane kick... it just sounded WRONG!!!
Oh and one Punctuation ERROR I spotted!!
*Clears Throat*
"My Identity is none of your concern Shell Brain!"
It should have been:
"My Identity is none of your concern, Shell Brain!"
You forgot to put in the COMMA so I got a little bit confused there... but don't worry thats just Minor... BRING IN PART 5 MAN!!
IM BEGGING YOU!!
Until then... Sayonara Alvin-Earthworm_Sama!!