4/5
Excellent drawing skills!
4/5
Excellent drawing skills!
Outstandingly good!
Haha, the squirrel stole her tree and paid the ultimate price. Poor squirrel.
Good work, loved the BG music. Was a bit short by keep it up! 4/5
I gave this submission a vote of "2"
Because you presented this in a nice way.
Oh thanks :)
I gave this submission a vote of "5"
Your drawing skills and art work is truly amazing. I love the red theme in this movie, it differentiates it from other proffessional artists on NGs and I think that this is the strong point in the success of this series!
Good work.
I gave this submission a vote of "5"
Suroy!
It's funny because I have never heard fo you before.
Such a nice flash. I think the reason you got such low Score and Views is because you made the opening talk scene TOOOO long and many people might have just bored of it and did not even see the well time spent making the fight scene!
Just put a skip button or make the talk shorter next time.
It was VERY good!
Thank's man, you really mentioned a thing that I had not thought.
Some people can given up to attend the animation due the long dialogue on the introduction. But I create a menu with scene selection and a function using ESC key to escape to main menu.
It's my first time using flash, and my first experience in animation too. On the next eps I use Shorts dialogues and other suggestions mentioned to improve the dynamic of animation.
Thanks to suggestions.
Nice drawings!
LOL! So how exactly did Freiza get there? Was there a dimensional portal?!
A bit weak!
Too many Grammar errors!
Ahhhh
2/5
Sorry for that ^^
I gave this submission a vote of "3"
Not bad, but next time but a Back ground on the last fight scene!
Twas good, keep this up.
I was tinking of putting a background in but i couldnt find one that would be consistent with all the movement. I'll have one next time.
Not bad!
Could you please raise the FPS in the sequel!
Dude, I think the FPS in this is 30! :\
I like! I like!
Awesome movie!
I knew you would make something worth watching!
Release part 2 in 7 days. =O)
Some problems:
- Spelling errors
- The credits are too long
- Too much dialogue
- The fight was too short
Thanks Trix!
I'll improve and release TUPT-2 soon!
Hmm... Im so good at making Animations... I Think?! Onegai, Shinjittekure!
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University of Plymouth
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