I gave this submission a vote of "4"
Very interesting song. Great art and animation. I like this, make another.
I gave this submission a vote of "4"
Very interesting song. Great art and animation. I like this, make another.
I gave this submission a vote of "5"
Pros:
Good;
Art and Animation
Use of Humour
Story/Concept
Cons:
Bad;
Re-used web toon jokes!
I gave this submission a vote of "5"
Sweet animation and art. The concept was good too.
The violence was WAAAAAAAY too excessive! =O(
what violence?
I gave this submission a vote of "5"
Very good concept with the trampoline at the end, I actually did not see that coming.
Nice art and animation, this has got to be front paged!
I gave this submission a vote of "1"
This had very little flash skills inputted into this!
Make part 2 better! =O)
I gave this submission a vote of "4"
Very good art and animation!
I never knew Spanish people liked Japanese Anime. Nice!
I gave this submission a vote of "5"
Obviously a lot of work and time was put into this.
I like the story, the graphics and animation are mega awesome.
Don't worry about the file size, large file sizes are good when they result in creating high quality flash movies.
Cons:
Smoothing out the FBF animation a lil bit more and create better special effects and explosives... besides that, everything else is ok.
I gave this submission a vote of "5"
Very good sorite animation. I really found this funny. I like your sense of humour, this actually beats Majin-Piccolo's original work. Nice one.
PS: I saw the Youtube link, that party boy joke still puzzles me! I dont see what makes it funny?! =OS
because you can se his ass
I gave this submission a vote of "5"
Just cause I am a Naruto fan,
however it's time for constructive critique:
1 - 9.9MB. no no no! Too long to load for a sprite flash, many ppl don't like that, try to keep it under 5MB for more viewers.
2 - Good fight and endings, however, I guess this got no views because it does not stand out from the other Naruto vs Sasuke flashes on NG. Some ppl might say: "Seen one Naruto flash, seen them all." So you really have to make yours stand out for more viewers to notice your work.
3 - Too much work was put into this I can tell however, it was not very captivating. Maybe some humour or sad sorrow scenes would have been nice.
4 - The text in the dialog was unreadable... horrible horrible font man! Don't do that next time.
PS: I voted 5 just to help you out, but this would have naturally gotten a 3 from me! >_<
Thank You I will make sure I will address those problems next time
Hmm... Im so good at making Animations... I Think?! Onegai, Shinjittekure!
Age 37, Male
Student
University of Plymouth
United Kingdom
Joined on 11/1/05